Shunto's Narrative

Pineapple

Once upon a time there was aq grandmother and grandfather who lived in the mountain. Every day the grandfather was mowing the lawn in the mountains and  the grandmother was washing  the clothes in the river. When the grandmother washed in the river the big pineapple came flowing. The grandmother said,“Large pineapple has been flowing.”

Grandmother back home and waited for grandfather to come back.

“What is this?" Grandfather said.

“Looks like delicious let's eat."

Grandmother tried to cut off some pineapple with a kitchen knife. When the grandmother cut the big pineapple a little baby boy came out.

Grandfather and grandmother were very happy because they don’t have children.

"Your name was Pineapple, because you’re born from pineapple”

4 years later, Pineapple don’t do any exercise and so lazy. One day terrible news came. It was news that aliens come to mess around and were killing humans in the city. So grandmother and grandfather didn’t do any work in outside. The house became poor because grandmother and grandfather didn’t do any work.

"I came to defeat the aliens” Pineapple said.

"Stop" grandmother said.

"Please stop," grandfather said.

"I would no longer eat something delicious so I defeat the aliens."

The Pineapple did not listen to his grandfather and grandmother so Pineapple went to go to the aliens base.  

Grandfather gave him a sword and grandfather said, “This was treasure that my grandfather found." Grandmother gave him delicious sushi. Grandmother cried and said, “Good luck Pineapple.”

Pineapple went to the alien’s base. There are so many aliens but Pineapple used the treasure sword and defeated all the aliens. The aliens boss was coming so Pineapple ate the sushi and use the sword and won. When Pineapple went back to the home the grandmother and grandfather were so happy. Grandfather said, “You did it.” Grandmother said, “My boy.”

After Pineapple killed all the aliens the king give money to Pineapple and Pineapple worked hard and ate many delicious things.

By Shunto Harada

Great work Shunto. I liked your use of direct speech and the story had a complication and a resolution. Your next learning steps are to: use full-stops and capital letters properly. As well as to use ‘the’ and write in the past tense.