Lost in the woods
Bella and Rosalie landed in Christchurch, New Zealand.They came from Australia to see all
the native animals. Bella is tall with long blonde hair and her passion is to help others. Rosalie has long brown
curly hair and she likes to help others too.
First the girls needed to find a hotel to stay in but they took the wrong turn and it took them into the woods.
The rental car broke down so they were stuck in the woods. Bella saw a big light coming their way.
Rosalie heard a noise, it was a car. The car stopped for them and they got in. Bella asked the stranger, “Can you
take us to a hotel?” And then the stranger did. The girls arrived at the hotel, it was amazing! There was an inside
pool, a spa and king size beds.
The next day Bella and Rosalie found these long wands under the beds, so Bella picked them up. The girls were thinking about their house in Australia and they suddenly turned up at their house. Then they realized it was a travelling machine. “Let’s go to Paris then London,” Bella said. Then they found out that they could appear anything in their hands. So they wished for a million dollars and it appeared in their hands. They were the richest people in the world.
Next they wished for a big castle and got one. It had 30 bedrooms, 35 bathrooms, 15 living rooms and 40 kitchens. They could do anything they wanted. After a while they used their wands way too much and got turned into witches. They did’nt want that. So they went to their magic books and they looked, looked and looked.
After a while Bella and Rosalie found the spell that they wanted. They cast the spell and they went back to
normal. They lived in their castle forever, happily ever after.
DONE BY JESSICA ETHERINGTON
Well done Jesse, you’ve worked very hard at this. Good use of language and words that are more descriptive. Your next learning steps are to use consistent tense, to use speech marks correctly and to add more detail to your characters as things happen.
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