James' Narrative

U.S.S EXPLODE 1562

Once upon a time in a world so far away James (Captain of the U.S.S explode, looks like a brute and is really rich) and Josh were searching for a planet called Fart on the U.S.S Explode 1562. They found a planet called Fart (it gets bigger each time someone farts).

James and Josh were traveling finally into space and landed safely on planet Fart. James and Josh stepped on planet Fart and saw Farterains the people who live on planet Fart. Planet Fart said, “Self destruction, 50 seconds.” We got all the Farterains onto the U.S.S Explode. Bob and Tm hopped onto the U.S.S Explode and watched their planet blow up and they let out a really loud cry (like this ➹➸♛♝╳ =Ahh).

Bob and Tim said in Farterian ↹⇒➤➛➹➸♛♝╳╫. This translated into: they’ll pay the price for what they did to our planet. Tim and Bob said, “Hi” to James and Josh. Tim and Bob said, “Time to die James and Josh each ran and got a gun each. James said, “Won’t shoot if you don't kill us.” So Josh asked, “What's the problem? We didn't mean to blow up your planet. We’re explorers not fighters.”

James said, “I can get you guys a new planet and guess why we saved your entire race? Because we did not want you guys to go extinct. They’re in the hangar by the way, you guys can go live on planet Uranus with no other race so it is practically free for any alien race.”

Everyone had a celebration for the new planet. James and Josh had drinks and did cheers to the Farterians new planet Uranus. Everyone helped rebuild planet Uranus to their standards so they could live there safely. They didn’t die and they had clean oxygen to breath.

James and Josh said, “Goodbye.” James and Josh went back to planet Explode and James was promoted to official captain of the U.S.S Explode. Josh became his second in command. James also got married, had 2 sons which someday will take his place on the U.S.S Explode. Everyone lived happily ever after other than the Farterian king who waits for his revenge on Earth.

To be continued.............next millenium.,

James, you did a great job of using paragraphs and direct speech. Next time, focus on making sure you use consistent tense and capital letters at all times.